when Makayla ignored the "Enter At Your Own Risk" sign on Mr. Sedgewick's property line, she had no idea what the consequences would be. she got rely smaller and smaller and smaller until she was as small as your pinky Mr. Sedgewick loves to catch flies and she got cot in one of his fly traps she stayed ther all night and died because she had nothing to eat and to hear an hour felt like a day and she spent 16 hours ther and finely died THE END.
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makayla
2/19/2014 02:38:08 am
That's not very nice Kyle!!!! :o
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makayla
2/18/2014 03:40:56 am
When Kelsey ignored the "Enter at Your Own Risk" sign on Mr.Sedgewick's property line,she had no idea what the consequences would be.As she entered back yard, she noticed the most beautiful flower she had seen in her whole life.But before she could get to the flower, she tripped on a string tied in just the right position to trip someone. As she fell, Kelsey noticed what she had fallen into. It seemed she had fallen into blue goo the size of a shoe. This goo seemed to be getting bigger! Now it was the size of a puddle...a bath tub... a river!!
She was shrinking!!! How could this be? Many questions tossed and turned in Kelsey mind but it seemed that the road of questions just kept getting bigger.
Kelsey decided that she needed to find shelter so she hid inside an empty jar. It seemed to be a great decision until Winter,the cat, noticed her. As Winter ran for her, she ran into the table leg and down came the lid to the jar.
The jar lid landed right on top of the jar and sadly Kelsey's arms couldn't reach the lid. Poor Kelsey never left that jar but always will regret .
The End
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Riley
2/18/2014 03:41:29 am
when Elsa ignored the "enter at your own risk" Mr. Sedgewicks's property line, she had no idea what the consequences would be. She had been wanting to find a short cut to school. Elsa had known he was always inside. So she walked closer and could see the top roof of the class rooms, and knew all she would have to do was walk strait through his gate and pass the backyard and she would be at school just like that. But that did not happen. She opened the wooden gate with a screech. She looked around and took one step and was sucked down like a vacuum would suck up a patch of dirt on your carpet! she felt walls around her but could still see his back yard.....Elsa was in an mason jar. she had her back pack which had shrunk with her and pulled out her phone. She called her parents which had come banging on the neighbor's door. He came out with a science jacket on and look strangely at them as they ran pass him! he yelled at them to stop! But they didn't ! they grabbed the jar and yelled at the wide eyed neighbor. He shook his head and laughed! he said"I've been experimenting in my back yard to shrink things. My test tube fell and shattered. the stuff must have toughed her! but I don't know about the jar?" her parents didn't care about the explanation of the accident! They just wanted there normal daughter preferably at her regular size! But like most accidents they are hard to have good news out of them. Elsa has never returned to regular size. She is just as short......poor her!
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chris is awesome
2/18/2014 03:55:36 am
When Silvia ignored the "Enter At Your Own Risk" sign on Mr. Sedgewick's property line, she had no idea what the consequences would be. She was quick acted like none of the traps touched her touched her, no kidding she went to gymnastics and learned from the best but finally she reached the last trap and didn't see it come. A amazing shrink ray that looked like a cute rabbit but it was a shrink ray alright no sir no bunny. She shrunk and was captured by a robot that put her in a jar a filthy jar. As my mom -- I mean a random person that I don't know who she is well she sat in the jar waiting for her dad to come get her not like she hasn't told him heheh. D; Well back to the story! the question is how will she get out? Well I don't know it don't look easy to get a little person out of a jar guarded by a robot . . . A . . . Man eating robot!!!! well that's the end of that girl forever ( the end der )